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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Tue Oct 25, 2005 2:04 pm
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| You already know how I feel about this story...I will add about CH4: having him sit in the chair turned around was genius, that part spoke volumes. |
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Madeleine
Joined: 27 Jun 2005
Reviews: 8
Location: Old Europe
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Tue Oct 25, 2005 4:46 pm
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A delightful story through and through.
A wonderful interaction between Lothíriel and Éomer; so warm and funny.
What a nice treat on a cold and wet evening. |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 12:16 am
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Yes! I am most happy with this latest chapter. 
Please update soon! |
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Frigg
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 63
Location: Taastrup, Denmark
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:14 am
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| Dear LBJ, I love your stories ...... as to the characters; none of us really has any notion what Lothíriel looks like - although most of us E/L writers portrait her slim, dark-haired, green/blue eyed (or both) .... and feisty at times. As for Éomer, well - I suppose that most of us see Karl Urban as he looked in LOTR before us when we portrait him - and how can he be anything but sexy??? Love, Frigg |
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KristyDi
Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 11:49 am
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Ha, how warm! I like this chapter. I loved that she got a comment in about the hated braids! I agree with inglor that have Eomer sit backwards in the chair was a great addition.
I'm looking foward to seeing what happens next. Will there be consequences for their improper alone-ness, will Lothierel confront her overly descriptive brothers? I'll be tuned in.  |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Wed Oct 26, 2005 10:06 pm
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That was so sweet! I really like your versions of Eomer and Lothiriel, I think they're very realistic (on top of the fact that Eomer's a sexy beast  ) Keep up the great work! |
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Ilmatar
Joined: 20 May 2004
Reviews: 51
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Thu Oct 27, 2005 5:18 am
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The poor girls of Gondor. Their parents keep them well protected, and then they meet someone like Eomer. Loved him (not very surprising, is it? ).
The part where Eomer spoke about the march to the Black Gate, and how in his mind Lothiriel represented all the good things in the world, was very nice. It cannot be a bad start to a relationhip. I also liked the fact that he confessed that he had already been in love once.
They way she literally fell into his arms was great. I think poor old Lothiriel is going to seriously lose her heart. Gandalf is not a bad matchmaker... |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:43 pm
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Wonderful chapter!
I couldn't suppress the HUGE GRIN (looked something like this one probably ----> ) that came to my face when I read the part about her braids cushioning her fall! That kept me smiling for the rest of the chapter!
Your Eomer is wonderful, and I love the fact that he was also uneasy about meeting Lothiriel. I can tell that these two will get along just fine. Between Eomer's confident charm, and Lothiriel's sweet charm, they make a pretty ideal pair.
Great job! I can't wait to read more.
Michelle... |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Wed Nov 02, 2005 1:51 pm
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| This newest chapter was great! I really enjoy the byplay between Eomer and Lothiriel. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next... More soon, please! |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Thu Nov 03, 2005 12:01 am
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| Too sweet. I love Eomer in this :0P Great job and keep up the great work! |
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