Reviews for "I can only manage One"

Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:41 am

LBJ - you're doing great; keep it up and keep'em coming (the chapters). I love your characters ...... Frigg

Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:44 pm

I'm so happy that they're getting along so well. They are perfect for one another, arent they?
He's brave, she's brave...they're a perfect pair.

I really enjoyed your descriptions of the entertainment. Your words really transported me there, and I felt as though I was watching the action and drama unfold, as well. Smile smiley face

Great job! Update soon.

Michelle...

Sat Nov 05, 2005 12:40 pm

I'm in a bit of a rush at the moment (moving into a new flat, and the husband is not very useful), but at least I wanted to take the 5 minutes to tell you how much I'm still enjoying this particular story.
The next of your regular updates will be a welcomed break from searching for something in those packing cases.

Mon Nov 07, 2005 11:32 am

I certainly did not expect that to happen. Lothiriel showed some real courage, and I think it really impressed Eomer too. You made her reaction seem so natural and the way she recued the baby really fitted her character. Sometimes authors make their leading ladies perform unbelievable heroic/stupid acts to show that they have character, but this was just right. Smile smiley face

Very good.

The action scene fitted the story very well, and I am glad this story had so many different aspects. It is always nice to be surprised as a reader, and this surprise surely was positive. Smile smiley face

I loved the brandy. Very Happy smiley face

I wonder if she is going to do something silly.

Wed Nov 09, 2005 8:21 pm

I also must commend you on the handling of the lion scene. The way you wrote it, without any dramatics on her part, she just did what she had to do. Like all good heros do. One word or phrase would have greatly decreased that scene. The subtlety was very well done.

Kissing is for more than just lips... More subtle genius.

The entrance to the Dimholt was perfect. Really becoming a fan of your Lotheriel and Eomer.

Wed Nov 09, 2005 10:38 pm

*laughs*

*continues laughing*

Oh, this is great.

*giggles*

Please, more.

Wed Nov 09, 2005 10:38 pm

Great Chapter!

Loved this
“I think I would be more insulted if you did not respond.”

I love that Eomer is standing his ground aginst Lori's father. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Thu Nov 10, 2005 1:49 am

Oh, he's so sweet with her! Wonderful, keep up the good work! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Nov 13, 2005 4:30 am

Late again, but still enchanted by your story.
I can understand Imrahil's objection although my reasons are different. Is it really possible to ride together in those saddles? There is hardly any space for Eomer (if the saddles from the movies are genuine). Where should Lothiriel squeeze her butt? She would have to sit on the pommel. Outch! I mean the whole idea is very romantic by rather uncomfortable.
Sorry, moving flat put me in a pragmatic mood.
Looking forward to their arrival in Edoras and the wedding, not to mention the wedding night. After all, now she should know quite a bit of what to expect.

Tue Nov 15, 2005 8:56 am

I've finally found time to catch up with your latest chapter and just wanted to let you know I'm enjoying your story very much. Myself, I would hate to have to ride under the mountains, but I suppose with Éomer it becomes bearable.

Now I am looking forward to those wedding customs and of course the wedding night...

Lia

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