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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:23 pm
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And bye-bye to the braids! Wonderful chapter, keep up the great work!  |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:34 am
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Excellent! Down with braids! Woo!
I can't wait for more.  |
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Saccopelista

Joined: 28 Sep 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:22 pm
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This is going to be difficult.
After our short "jewelry" discussion on PM yesterday I had problems to concentrate on the finer points of your last installment. Then I wanted to make a remark about Lothiriel's infatuation with hairstyles, but as others have already commented on it, I thought I should think about something else.
But perhaps it is just enough to say that this is a wonderful story, warmhearted and funny. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Thu Nov 17, 2005 2:42 pm
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It's great that Lothiriel is coming into her own now that she is betrothed to Eomer. I feel that because she has had such a sheltered life, that her little rebellions (i.e. the braids, riding with Eomer) are huge milestones for her. The more she rebels, the more she accepts her new role in life. Not that she seems to be having any issues with marrying Eomer at the moment.
I'm surprised that she's been so flirtatious with Eomer. But really, who could blame her?
Great chapter!
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jasmine08
Joined: 28 Aug 2004 Reviews: 4
Location: Washington State, USA
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Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:54 pm
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i loved the latested chapter. I think you caught the differences between Gondor and Rohan very well. I totaly beleive the way Lori's brothers are very doggedly following her and Eomer to make sure nothing "improper" happens.
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japete
Joined: 20 Jan 2005 Reviews: 23
Location: Illinois, USA
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Thu Nov 24, 2005 1:53 am
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| Your story has been a most enjoyable diversion from RL. Your characterizations of Lothiriel and Eomer are very fleshed out; it's amazing how much we learn by their conversations and actions - not to mention Lothiriel's saucy inner voice. Eomer truly appreciates her for her intellience as well as her beauty. Eowyn and Faramir had it right when they said that Lothiriel was repressed and that Eomer and Rohan would be good for her; she's not even Queen yet and she's defying her father and silly Gondorian customs left and right. And now we can see how good she will be for the people. Throw in a 'real man' like Eomer and Duty doesn't look so bad. For someone who is underappreciated by her own kin, Lothiriel certainly knows how to earn the respect of the staff (always agree advice given by the senior servants) and how to help Eomer with his rule. Brava! |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:12 pm
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That was great! Keep up the wonderful work!  |
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Saccopelista

Joined: 28 Sep 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Fri Nov 25, 2005 6:57 am
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They are the perfect couple.
Isn't there any chance of a some tension? Some trouble in paradise? No flying household items? Not a single saucer? |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Mon Nov 28, 2005 4:29 pm
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Now that I am back from my Thanksgiving trip home, I get to read this! Yay!
I enjoyed it muchly....especially the part where Lothiriel is conveniently re-thinking how the situation got started - giving her father the benefit of the doubt and all that.
I can't wait to see what happens when she rides astride. *grins* Should be interesting! |
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stoneflwr1
Joined: 24 Mar 2005 Reviews: 38
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Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:11 am
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| Go Lothiriel! Hehehe....I love the way she stood up to her father at the end of the chapter! I hope she is going to confront him about forcing her to marry. Maybe then they can make up. Anyway, this was another great chapter. |
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