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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:19 am
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Yes. Yes, YES! She finally tells her father off! I am so pleased!
More! I wanna see her daddy's reaction... This ought to be good. |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Thu Dec 01, 2005 11:40 am
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I can understand that Lothiriel is still angry with her father for arranging a marriage without consulting her first.
But there were two stirring the pot. Eomer didn't seem to think that there was anything wrong with "organizing" himself a wife he had never seen before and who he didn't bother to ask. And Lothiriel doesn't appear to be overly upset with him. Rather the contrary. Perhaps because he lets her have all the "sweets"? |
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KristyDi
Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:00 pm
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Go Lori! She's about to be a married woman and a Queen. Her father does not need to dictate her dress. She managed to be forceful but polite.
Great Stuff! Can't wait for more. |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Dec 03, 2005 7:58 pm
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Eomer is being so attentive and caring towards Lothiriel. How sweet! And to think that Lothiriel was actually afraid of him in the beginning. Her feelings for him have come such a long way from what they were. 
Lothiriel's father is definitely going to have to get used to the new Lothiriel.  I *almost* feel sorry for the guy...after all, he is losing his only daughter.
Great chapter!
Michelle... |
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KristyDi
Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:41 pm
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Aww, there's gonna be kissin'! I love your Eomer. And you've done a good job making Lori both nervous and eager about her wedding night.
Great Chapter! |
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Ilmatar
Joined: 20 May 2004
Reviews: 51
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Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:19 pm
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I have been offline for far too long. Well, the good thing is that now I got to read two new chapters!
Great job as always. I love the new outspoken Lothiriel. She is really lovely, and I imagine her openness will make Eomer like her even more.
It is heartbreaking how worried Lothiriel is about her wedding night. I quite like that. Hopefully a little kissing and talking will ease her never a bit.
Happy writing! |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 3:22 pm
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Oh, I love it. Wonderful job, keep up the great work!  |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Wed Dec 14, 2005 3:17 pm
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How could this happened? I missed one update!
But on the other hand: I had a double treat tonight.
And perhaps it was good this way, becaue reading two chapters in a row I could see more of a development in Lothiriel's character. That was nicely done. She is getting more of an equal partner for Eomer, althought there is still something of the naive and even insecure girl. So it wasn't overdone.
Only two more chapters and then this is over? You must be joking!
What is coming next? |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Wed Dec 14, 2005 4:11 pm
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| Goodness, the cliffies never end! That was so sweet, up in the watch tower. Wonderful. Awesome job, keep up the great work! |
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Ilmatar
Joined: 20 May 2004
Reviews: 51
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 7:09 am
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Great chapter. First I must say that it is sad to know that there are only two chapters left.
Mesuseld on fire! I hope it will not be completely destroyed and I really hope that the wedding will not be delayed because of that. Must be a strange evening for Lothiriel: straight from bliss to chaos. |
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