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Madeleine

Joined: 27 Jun 2005 Reviews: 8
Location: Old Europe
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 6:27 pm
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When I read the scene in the watch tower a quote from one of my favourite authors came to my mind. I had always planned to put it as a kind of headline on one of the last chapters of my current story arc, but now I feel it is much more fitting for your story and especially this part:
"Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction."
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Wed Dec 21, 2005 5:19 pm
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How sweet. I love the way you wrote Lori's view of the wedding. I felt that way during my own. It was all rather surreal and overwhelming, but wonderful at the same time.
And I love Eomer sneaking them off and having planned ahead to do it! Gotta love a man with a plan! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:19 pm
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I adored this chapter! Lothiriel's anxiety and excitement over her wedding came through so vividly. I loved the way that she and Eomer actually tried to take the time to get to know one another, as much as possible, before they were wed. Fantastic!
And their practice run before their wedding night was extremely sweet. Her first kiss! Aww...
Wonderful chapter! Update soon,
Michelle... |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Thu Dec 22, 2005 7:38 am
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SQUEEE!!!
This was great! I'm all happy. Woot! |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Thu Dec 22, 2005 1:50 pm
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Ok, I'm going to go swoon.... now. That was lovely! Wonderful job, I can't wait for the last chapter! |
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Wed Dec 28, 2005 7:13 pm
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I really enjoyed this story and all the ones you've done with Eomer and Lori. I'm looking foward to whatever you have next.
I think it's so cute how both of them are realizing that they're in love, but aren't sure how to share it with the other. And the visual of Lori in Eomer's robe, curled up in the hall is so precious.
Great Job! |
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littlecorinthian
Joined: 06 Feb 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Seattle, WA
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Fri Dec 30, 2005 1:44 am
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Oh, it's over :0( But it was a fun ride. I loved the bit when he found her in the hall- it was very sweet. Wonderful job, I have really enjoyed this story. I hope you do keep writing about Eomer and Lothiriel, I really like the way you write them both! Great job!  |
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Lialathuveril

Joined: 24 Aug 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 6:07 am
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What a shame it's finished!
It's so nice to see their marriage is not only about the physical side, but that their hearts are involved as well. And Elfwine is on the way already, good for Rohan! Thank you for a very pleasurable read about my favourite couple and I'm looking forward to any other stories you have up your sleeve. |
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