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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Oct 05, 2005 1:30 am
I'm so glad you decided to post this here Smile smiley face because I really like your story. Firstly it's a vivid portrayal of how poeple feel after such a battle. What a horrible picture, especially for children. I like the way you introduced Legolas and gave us a heart-wrenching insight into his thoughts and feelings.


Ah, my fav warden... Just Crying or Very sad smiley face Crying or Very sad smiley face Crying or Very sad smiley face Need a tissue Crying or Very sad smiley face

Thanks for sharing.
Binka
 
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004
Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
Wed Oct 05, 2005 6:53 am
Deeply suggestive and mostly touching. I don't think I have come across a story that shows Legolas in such an emotional state that still managed to remain so realistic before... I was almost in tears! Thank you for this magnifiscent piece.
 
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004
Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:25 am
There were more than one chapters!!! Wow! Somehow, I got the impression the first chapter was the whole story. But it doesn't matter, it is all the better since I loved the second chapter as well! I will be looking forward to the third part! Very Happy smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
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Thu Oct 06, 2005 9:46 am
Did I mention that I love your Gimli? I believe I told you this in private and of course it's worth saying aloud Wink smiley face Your Gimli is such a compelling character. Thumb smiley face He's a good, caring friend to Legolas, and he appreciates the Galadhrim sacrifice even though he didn't like Haldir.
Bravo, my dear. Eagerly looking forward to reading the final chapter. Very Happy smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 11:39 am
What a pity there won't be any more chapters. This was a superb piece of emotional writing and a great insight into Gimli and Legolas' friendship. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing Smile smiley face

Hugs,
Binka
 
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004
Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
Sat Oct 08, 2005 6:22 pm
The scene where Legolas tended to Haldir's dead body simply took my breath away. It was somber and yet reaching deep inside, a precious moment that seemed to capture Legolas true grief and encase it in one single clear image... The whole story was so well written, the scenes depicted so artfully chosen that it really deserves praise. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Neni
 
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nieriel
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Tue Mar 16, 2010 4:21 pm
A beautiful telling...my tears are still falling. Thank you.
 
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