Reviews for "An Offer Not To Be Refused"

Sun Oct 09, 2005 4:27 pm

I've been waiting for this sequel and I'm delighted with it. I'm very impressed by the wealth of information and details you have woven into it. Again it promised to become a very complex plot. I love the interaction between Eomer and Aragorn, especially when they talk about the problems with the line of succession in Rohan. Quite nice the little story about the two drunken commanders of the Royal Guards. Just the right amount of humour without getting rediculous.

And now I'm waiting for Eomer to choke on his porridge.

Please update soon.

Mon Oct 10, 2005 1:55 am

Awsome! More!

Mon Oct 10, 2005 2:35 am

I loved the beginning. It certainly had me confused for a couple of seconds. At first I thought he was dreaming, but then it turned out to be totally different story.

This chapter really gave a better perspective of what is happening in Arda after the war. Sometimes author's just make things seem as if the war had no impact what so ever on the people and the general conditions. You really have made things realistic, and I liked the interaction between the old wise ranger and the young king with a bad temper. I love the way the chracters develop in every chapter and how their personalities become more and more alive in the process.

I really hope Eomer is still alive in the next chapter. Wink smiley face

I am really looking forward to his reaction.

Mon Oct 10, 2005 3:51 am

Dearest ---- you continue as well as you ended the first one .... now keep the next chapters coming; your readers are eager to see how the story develops. Love, Frigg

Mon Oct 10, 2005 5:24 pm

I wasn't actually aware of the other story but I am now tempted to check it out. I like the beginning of this; the language is very readable and the characters are nicely drawn. I did like the opening scene and also the interplay between Aragorn and Eomer.

SW

Tue Oct 11, 2005 1:20 pm

Dear Madeleine,
I was really pleased to see you've posted a sequel to 'Imrahil's daughter' and will certainly be watching it. As always it is very well written and witty.

I have the feeling, though, that what is going to come will put Eomer off his porridge for life! I hope you have a healer nearby to resuscitate him...

Greetings
Lia

Thu Oct 13, 2005 10:51 pm

There will be more, won't there? Please? *hopeful*

Fri Oct 14, 2005 2:03 am

Wow!
Whatelse is there to say?
Perhaps that Lothiriel must have gotten her single-mindedness from Imrahil? The Prince definitely holds promise for future humour. Aragorn sniggering in the background was a great touch. Who needs enemies with such friends!
The interaction between the siblings was wonderfully written and with so many nuances. You made Éowyn come to live in just one chapter. In other stories you always get told that brother and sister loves each other; here you can feel it in every line.
I just hope the next instalment comes up soon.
I'm looking forward to learn more about Lothiriel's reaction. I mean, sooner or later Imrahil has to tell her that she is going to get married.
Keep on writing.

Sun Oct 16, 2005 2:52 am

The sister-brother interaction was wonderful, you have really succeeded in describing the nature of a relationship that siblings share.

I loved Eomer's realization in the end of the chapter. It must be a scary and exciting feeling to be bethroted to someone you are crazy about without knowing what the other person thinks about the situation.

I am looking forward to find out what Lothiriel's thoughts are, especially about the kiss. I bet the next part of the story will be more than interesting. Smile smiley face

Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:45 pm

Hey ! continue!!... i like it!...

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