Reviews for "Salt and Sweet"

Sat Oct 15, 2005 8:33 pm

This is a very nice piece. I could have cried, but it has a happy ending, so I will not. Thank you for sharing.

Sun Oct 16, 2005 9:43 am

Beautiful! Simply beautiful. I love Imrazhor's words to her, his sweet offer to her! Thumb smiley face

Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:52 pm

Excellent. A touching look into the bitter sweet nature of immortality

Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:28 pm

Ugh!!!! I wish you could hear that, I should make you a wav file, cuz that is the sound of an utter loss for words. I love your drabbles so much. I always know that if I need a painfully goose bump inducing read about something that will always draw me to a new area of interest that I never considered before, this is the place. I've said it a million times and I'll say it again, you are the beta for the pic that paints 1000 words and you do it bigger, better and more beautifully. This was just absolutely one of your best too, such a tender sentiment, your writing is so lyrical, and so lovely. I wanna be like you when my drabbles grow up.

Thu Oct 20, 2005 4:09 pm

This was very very beautiful! Thank you!

Sat Feb 18, 2006 8:21 am

I caught this on the story of the day. I know, I already commented, but I am doing so again.

The thing that really strikes me is that this is truly a drabble. Most of us write a scene or a small part of something much larger. However, as I understand a drabble, it is a whole story. And, you have managed that. This is truly exquisite. Again, thank you for sharing.

Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:44 pm

Beautiful.

Sun Oct 22, 2006 7:26 pm

This was a very poetic piece. Short, but packed full of imagery and while sad, offered a ray of comfort.

Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:00 pm

That quote at the end is very, very evocative and ... tempting. Also, I like mortality described as being "beneath the shadow of the clock."

Whatever happened to her? DId she fade when Imrazor died, or did she linger and watch generations of her children mature and die? Tragic either way.

Thanks for writing these characters. Am liking them more and more.

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