Reviews for "Rings"

Tue Oct 18, 2005 10:44 am

A very nice story, I enjoyed how it came back around to the rings.

Thu Oct 20, 2005 6:47 am

Oh wow... In such short chapters you write so beautifully why Finrod left his Amarië and how both felt about it. The last chapter is so rewarding, finally they talk to each other. This is just beautiful:

“You were always with me. In my darkest moment, you came to me and gave me strength.”

“Your father let me stay and I found some comfort. When what was mine, was not.”

Beautiful Inglor!

Thu Oct 20, 2005 10:27 am

These are awesome in their profound understatement. Amazing to keep the tension through a series of drabbles. Also, love the double entendre of the title.

Sat Oct 22, 2005 9:58 am

This is such a beautiful series of drabbles. I like the way you explore the idea, bringing it full-circle (or should I say turning it into a ring) and portray the characters. Very Happy smiley face

Thanks for sharing.

Tue Oct 25, 2005 11:27 pm

Wonderful drabbles, Inglor! The series is emotional and keeps the tension full all the way around,literally. The 'rings' and the many meanings in this series is most interesting in the angle you've presented. Very enjoyable and unique!

Kendra

Thu Oct 27, 2005 8:33 pm

I missed these somehow. Very poignantly done. Like another series of drabbles that I just read, all of these were powerful on their own, but tied together like this into a series really gave them impact. I especially like how the first two reflect each other and the way the last one ties everything back together. Well done.

Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:34 pm

Awesome drabbles Inglor. Very moving and haunting. Such a sad story yet a beautiful ending.

Fri Oct 13, 2006 5:21 pm

How exquisite! Lovely reuse of lines to emphasise the point and the punctaute the longing and the sorrow.

Sigh... I love the way you write Finrod...

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