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Kelticat

Joined: 09 Nov 2005
Reviews: 2
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Wed Nov 09, 2005 1:22 pm
Already within the first two chapters this story has me hooked. It is both new and original, and I applaude you. Both of you are accomplished writers, and I am eagerly awaitng the next chapters! Very Happy smiley face
~Kelticat
 
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Ottis413

Joined: 01 Oct 2005
Reviews: 21
Location: West Virginia, USA
Tue Apr 04, 2006 9:34 pm
I like it! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Sun Apr 09, 2006 1:51 am
I am enjoying it, it is interesting so far. I would like to know how old the girl is, though. I don't think you have ever said. She's obviously older than 10 since that's her brother's age, but I'm guessing she could be anywhere from 12 - 16.
 
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:21 am
At the end of chapter 3, there is no transition from their conversation to a fight with a wolf, and that was very confusing. You may want to look at that section again and find a better way than a cut scene to start that fight bit. Other than that, its very good so far; I'm looking forward to more reading.
 
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