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wrenfeather
Joined: 14 Dec 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: Gettysburg, PA
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:12 am
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Excellent start! I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward with great relish for the next chapters. You've made Lothiriel's brothers most interesting and appealing, and I hope they too will feature prominently in future chapters (or even their own stories).  |
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InweTasartirTinuviel
Joined: 29 Jul 2005
Reviews: 5
Location: Mexico
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:48 pm
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| Hey Madeleine! your story is excellent!.... continue!... i can'n barely wait to see next chapter! |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 2:07 pm
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I love this continuation of your little saga.
You manage very well guiding us through Lothiriel's emotions. It is certainly quite confusing when the man who keeps you on your toes is far away and suddenly you learn your father had you betrothed to him. And you don't know how that guy feels about you.
No Eomer, but Amrothos makes a good substitute - at least for a while. |
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derakh
Joined: 20 Jun 2003
Reviews: 20
Location: Salem, Oregon
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:29 pm
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I've been looking forward to this installment and you certainly didn't disappoint. Very well written and it was a nice touch adding Lothiriel's true reaction after her brother's left - it's nice to know she's doesn't always keep up her facade. It was also nice to see Eomer's consideration of her thoughts/desires about the situation.
As usual, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for not keeping us hanging for too long with this installment. |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:45 pm
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This is lovely.
I especially like that Eomer is giving her a chance to say no. And that she recognizes that.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter - please update soon! |
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krazykataave
Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:37 pm
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Very nice story. May i humbly suggest that instead of so long a first chapter perhaps break it up into chapters or subchapters. Create a little suspense instead of trying to get everything out at once. I can't wait to read more i am adding to my watched story list right now.
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ckfrank
Joined: 07 Nov 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Michigan, USA
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 9:31 am
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| Awesome story, you bring the characters to life. Looking forward to much more. |
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Ilmatar
Joined: 20 May 2004
Reviews: 51
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 12:13 pm
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Oh poor girl. It must be dreadfull to have all those questions and not having anyone to properly answer them. 
I loved the conversation; the way she fired questions at him, and how he did his best to avoid giving an answer. Her wanting those "warm" feelings back and wanting to know where they can lead her or them was a really great passage. Boy, is she in for a surprise. 
I am glad her brother enlightened her about Eomer's feelings, and I agree with him... their union will be very good entertainment. |
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InweTasartirTinuviel
Joined: 29 Jul 2005
Reviews: 5
Location: Mexico
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:21 pm
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Suilad Madeleine!.... oh!... i love your Amrothos!... he is just like my own brother!.... hahahahahahahaha!....
Please, continue the story faster!....  |
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:12 pm
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This is great! Amrothos is just....I laughed multiple times reading this.
Please post more! |
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