Reviews for "First Night"

Tue Nov 01, 2005 2:26 pm

"Morwen hoped he knew better than to ask a whore who her father was. Apparently he did."

This is just one of many lines that hit me.

What a well-crafted piece you have here. Nothing wasted, nothing lacking. I found myself enjoying every line - unhurridly, in the moment. Nice nice nice nice nice.

Now please point me to your Gamling/Morwen novel. Smile smiley face

Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:35 pm

Very lovely Neu. He is so sexy I'm afraid of myself now. hehe. I love her though, she's so great. So brave and touching. The one small glimpse you give into the horror that she's seen is just the perfect touch too. You really evoke the rather sleazy environment of the humans downstairs raising Caine, just all sorts of lovely little nuggets that help round out this wonderful little veggie net, *snort!* Cheese and Rice this is so good. Thanks for the free peek-a-boo. Anytime, just holler.

~g~

Wed Nov 02, 2005 12:12 am

I'm glad to see you've posted this so sexy and well written story. Thanks for letting me help.

Wed Nov 02, 2005 2:22 pm

interesting story line pre-ring war Rohan sets up a lot of possibilities. I am in agreement with diddler07 where is the rest of the story?

Very nice details Shocked smiley face

Kat

Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:41 pm

I find myself quite jealous of Morwen - messin' with my man, but that's okay. This is a lovely, well-rounded little ficlet and I find myself wanting more. I understand and agree with her wanting someone more seasoned and experienced rather than some young rowdy boy who would probably want to swing from the chandelier and not sleep a wink all night. Okay - I want more!

Did you hear that? And TELL me when you post Gamling stuff! I must now find Ghetto, who did not tell me you had posted or was WRITING this gem. And here, I thought we were FRIENDS!

Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:34 am

Wow - that's what I call a really delicious read. Wonderfully done, without getting flat or boring in the "I-use-the-same-porn-terms-everyone-uses"-way. Original and wonderful. I love this.

Cúthalion

Sat Apr 15, 2006 10:21 pm

So glad I found your Gamling/Morwen stories. I have gone back to the beginning and am playing catch-up. Really well written, no wasted words and - given my own experience - it seems so hard to write sex with the right balance between emotion and 'what bits went where' ... Nice one. Looking forward to more of your work.

Mon May 01, 2006 4:23 pm

This is so well done! All the hot stuff is scorchingly delicious, and not an awkward phrase in sight, and such a story! Wonderful!

Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:20 pm

Hmmm, Neu, you certainly make me remember why I found horselords so utterly sexay and yeah your Gamling is great. This leaves me wondering about her past, how different the brothel business in Minas Tirith and Edoras might be. For a moment I thought: those two are gonna end up sleeping next to each other without any action (they make such a great fit), but awww, yeah this was good Smile smiley face

Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:19 pm

I just loved this. The awkwardness involved in getting things underway was very cleverly done and gave the whole thing a sense of realism somehow - that these are two normal people just like us even though they live in a fantasy land. You display some great wit as well: I couldn't help chuckling at lines like, “Intellectual pursuits, though, were not usually what the people she knew expected in bedroom conversation...” The prose flowed along really well and I didn’t hear any bum notes at all. Oh yeah, and the smut was pretty fine too Wink smiley face

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