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Diddler07
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 34
Location: USA
Tue Nov 15, 2005 1:46 pm
All things archery - there's a certain mystique to them I think. Kinda the 'oneness' that exists between the archer and his arrow. You captured that in your choice of words and presentation. Cool.
 
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twilla
Joined: 27 Jan 2005
Reviews: 33
Location: Los angeles
Tue Nov 15, 2005 11:11 pm
Oooh, s e X y.

twilla.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Nov 17, 2005 11:41 am
Sounds like you really thought about this, Blookking, really got into the moment. I liked the way the poem had visual aspects (the word/letter spacings).
 
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