Reviews for "Twist and Turns"

Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:19 pm

Oh, the beginning's quite promising. Keep up the good work!

Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:27 pm

This is an interesting story to read about Legolas being a bully. I hope you continue to update this.

Sun Nov 20, 2005 7:46 am

I love this first chapter. So sad she is now alone with both her parents gone. I can't wait to read more. Please post more soon!!! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Nov 20, 2005 4:36 pm

There are a few mistakes in spelling, but I'm sure most of it was from typing quickly. That happens to me a lot. Laughing smiley face

Other than that the story is off to a good start. It is sad when Legolas bullies her and when her mom dies. I can see that with none other but her freinds will greatly affect her. Kepp up the good work Razz smiley face

Tue Dec 13, 2005 4:16 pm

This story has the signs a good one. Im glad Legolas has changed from the first chapter I cant picture him being cruel to anyone for long Keep going I cant wait for the next chapter Very Happy smiley face

Tue Feb 28, 2006 2:33 pm

This story was off to such a good start! I hope you are going to continue. Smile smiley face

Thu Mar 23, 2006 12:43 pm

This is a really good beginning, and it has a great deal of potential. I hope you come back to this soon!

Sun May 21, 2006 10:14 pm

Great beggining! I look foward to reading more Bounce smiley face

Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:48 am

I love it how you have Legolas as the Bully at the start then change him to be ashamed of his actions. Your characters and your storyline is excellent. I look forward to more chapters.

Eruwesteth

Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:48 am

I love it how you have Legolas as the Bully at the start then change him to be ashamed of his actions. Your characters and your storyline is excellent. I look forward to more chapters.

Eruwesteth

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