How delightfully emotional and painful. I enjoy looking at things from the 'other' point of view and this is especially well-done. I can't remember reading anything from this perspective before and it was a lovely surprise to see this at the top of the list this morning.
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Wed Nov 23, 2005 3:16 pm
Chilling... Arda's lament, the fruit of the Valar. In well chosen words you picture an event that has gone one so long. Arda's weariness, her pain and Melkor's rape... An incredible drabble Rous. Amazing.
Tylany
Joined: 07 Aug 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: Stuck in a daydream.
Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:12 pm
Incredible the way you word it makes it so sad and tormented.
You could feel what Arda felt and it affected me greatly.
It also has a lot to do with what is going on in these days.
I think you did a wonderful job
shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004 Reviews: 24
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Sat Nov 26, 2005 12:04 am
That was a very nice Drabble that was a great dark and gloomy story