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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:12 pm

Very nice Nancy, thoughtful. I like being able to see so much depth in the few words of a drabble. This one's quite powerful.
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Mon Nov 21, 2005 1:20 pm

Beautiful!
 
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dolarabee

Joined: 22 Apr 2003
Reviews: 35
Location: Sydney, Australia
Mon Nov 21, 2005 4:26 pm

Ah, Boromir...

Well done, Nancy. I see the man, the warrior, I feel his thoughts and get thoroughly that he means them. All that in so very few words.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:12 pm

Very nice. I was at a loss as to who this was, as I apparently came in through the challenge page. Still, it is poignant and sums up what should be the sentiments of any forced to take the life of another.

Seems that interest is flagging for the drabble challenge. I still look forward to it every week. I hope it continues.

Thank you for sharing.
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Wed Nov 23, 2005 3:11 pm

Oh Nancy, what an incredible piece! So much pride is carried in the words, when I read it I thought... this must be Boromir and yes it was! Every word matters here. Precisouly balanced and a nice pacing. I loved it!
 
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shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004
Reviews: 24
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Sun Nov 27, 2005 1:54 am

Great Job not only can you do well with both but single as well good job
 
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BlookKING
Joined: 08 Sep 2005
Reviews: 2
Location: The George Washington University
Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:09 pm

Amazing how you conveyed so much in so few words. That is Boromir exactly as I would expect, only I would need a few pages to write such a thing.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:43 pm

Ooh, I like this one Smile smiley face And I wonder how I missed it the first time around!
Hmmmm, scars do tell tales, don't they... A part of personal history that can't be erased, shouldn't be erased. As always, your last line makes and marks the piece -- brava!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:26 pm

It's a featured story today, and OMG, I haven't seen it before?! This is awesome, Nancy. You've conveyed so much in this little tale: Boromir's pride, experience and history, all in one. Great, wonderful job.
 
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