Reviews for "Dark Eyes"

Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:21 pm

Very poignant and beautifully done. I can't wait for more.

Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:52 pm

I'm normally not a fan of first person writing, but this is very nicely done! Can't wait to read more!

Nove

Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:14 pm

This is pretty good so far. Things are moving kind of fast, but you are putting in enough detail that it is believable. I like your portrayal of Lothiriel. She isn't your stereotypical spoiled Princess but she isn't an over-the-top warrior either. You have a nice balance. I like what I've read so far and hope you continue this story.

Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:04 am

Ouch! I felt the pain in their parting at the end of Chapter 6. The hell with Gondorian propriety - your Lothiriel will fit in quite nicely in Rohan!

Short, long, whatever. Just keep those chapters coming. Please.

Tue Dec 20, 2005 1:43 pm

This is a very sweet fic. Lots of sugar in this.

To me, things did move very fast, and Eomer was TOO much a gentleman for me but considering canon, it did move fast. Considering how far apart they were and the possibility it was a political alighnment, it is possible a great deal of their 'wooing' took place via written letters. I would like to think they were in love and this is a very sweet telling of their story. I see you have many shorts. I shall have to peruse them as well.

Good job.

Wed Jun 21, 2006 5:38 pm

I really enjoyed this story. I liked your portrayal of both Eomer & Lothiriel. Neither was too OTT. I would love to see some fleshing out between the marriage and the later life story. Very well done!!

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