Reviews for "To Become a Queen"

Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:44 pm

Taking into consideration that she was still sitting on her horse and he was in full armour and that they were in the middle of a crowd, the moment of their meeting had an extraordinary sensual and tingling feeling to it.

Who would have thought that the removal of a glove and a simple kiss on the hand could be so sexy?

"I have been waiting for you." Oh, my!

Fri Dec 02, 2005 5:37 pm

Hi Madeleine!...

I will say it again.. I love Amrothos!.... really! just like my own brother!....
the discussion about Elphir "the experiment" well... i fell from my chair in laugh!.....

and also love so much that encounters between the main characters.... wwwwoooooooowww......

Keep posting please!!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:06 pm

I have to say I haven't read any of the other stories in this series, but I came across this on the Latest Stories page, and I must say I enjoyed the read so far. I particularly liked the idea of Lothiriel as a healer, and felt that gave a nice depth to the character.

Fri Dec 02, 2005 11:05 pm

I LOVE this story. Your characters have such depth and it is SO well written.

And Amrothos...dear lord, what a crack up. Some of his lines remind me of Oscar Wilde. Maybe that's intentional or I'm just reading too much into this, but reading this chapter, Oscar Wilde popped into my mind. I also like how you made Elphir a not so open-minded person, entering the element of Gondorian snobbery into her own family. It adds a more realistic and sobering, although irksome, effect to the story.

I'm very much looking forward to the next installment. It should either be a nice break from or a nice present after finals and papers. Smile smiley face

Sat Dec 03, 2005 5:02 am

As always your stories are a delight to read.
I found this part particularly insightful: "She had heard it in the first light of dawn when the people of Minas Tirith, after a night of fear and desperation, had already given up hope. At that moment she had not fully understood the meaning of that sound, could not have known that it meant deliverance." Referring to the battle, but also to her current situation. Very clever and amusing to say the least. Good stuff. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Sat Dec 03, 2005 5:26 am

Dear Madeleine,
I'm so pleased to see you've found the time to continue the story. So at last the two meet again, and what a meeting! What woman wouldn't want to be greeted like that.

As I've told you before I love the way you write and your dialogue is superb. Those three brothers of Lothiriel's are very interesting characters and I begin to wonder if Elphir wants to put a spoke in their wheel? Now I'm looking forward to Meduseld and the wedding.

Love, Lia

Sat Dec 03, 2005 8:58 am

That last line made my heart flutter in anticipation. I am so excited that you are continuing this saga.

I really enjoy the banter between the siblings. And as insufferable as Elphir is, I kind of empathize with him. He seems to not have been as lucky as Lothiriel in his marital relations.

Best of wishes,
Annun

Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:23 pm

I don't recall if I've reviewed you or not... I'm such a scatterbrain.

I am enjoying this series so very much. Your characters have depth and so much personality they jump from the page.

Of course, her brothers are awesome. And Eomer... one can't say enough about Eomer.

Of course, I am old and hold a hankering for Gamling. Perhaps I shall see more of him? (Not trying to influence you in any way, nope not me.)

Thank you again and I look forward to more.

Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:22 pm

Oh My. The meeting was just hot, hot, hot! My goodness. How could a woman survive that without going insane? I expect the moment they will be alone together there will be sparks and er... (in loss for a better word) fire. Great job!

Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:42 pm

I have to say this is my favorite installment so far.

When he said "I have been waiting for you" chills went up & down the spine. How sexy, fan fan.

I agree w/Zee, your characters have such depth they came alive & jump off the page.

I look forward to further updates with great anticipation.

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