Reviews for "Letters in the sand"

Mon Dec 05, 2005 5:11 pm

Very awesome read, Rhapsy! I love your Maglor, you know. Wink smiley face

Now, just let him be a happy Noldor lord for a while... Very Happy smiley face

Mon Dec 05, 2005 6:29 pm

That's such an original idea, the way you've paced / plotted this piece. I'm not sure what I was expecting, but that came as a very pleasant surprise (different structures, imaginative approaches really do it for me Wink smiley face

) As for the writing itself, it had a lovely, lyrical quality so fitting for Maglor, but with that darker edge. Inspired, Rhaps, seriously.

SW

Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:36 am

This is an amazing story, and very original, from the first line to the last. Once I read that some things were engraved in Maglor's soul, I realized how powerful beginning this line was. Letters can be drawn gently, by a subtle stroke of a quill, or by a sharp draw of a chisel. Maglor's soul bears stigmas that have been drawn in the most cruel way. And I love the idea of inserting these letters into the story. Very poignant and beautiful. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Tue Dec 06, 2005 6:49 pm

Very well done Rhapsy. Thanks for sharing your love of Maglor in such a beautiful, haunting, and original piece. Very Happy smiley face

Thu Feb 09, 2006 3:50 pm

From the first to the last word, you did a wonderful writing! Bravo!

Thu May 11, 2006 3:56 pm

Wow. I'm just reading all your stories, Rhapsy, and I just love this one. It's so different! It raises some interesting questions about the Valar's motivations and gives a lot of insight into how Maglor feels about his fate and his family.

Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:50 am

Nicely done.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

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