Otis, this is delightful. What a wonderful idea. I love how you stay in the 'Hobbit's voice' through the pretentious and rambling style of the telling of the story.
I especially love this line >>"Of course this distressed me to no end, as I was quite looking forward to some salt pork and potatoes for my dinner..." It is so very in character for a hobbit.
LMAO about the militant indignation of Uncle Otho's ram
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Thu Dec 22, 2005 8:01 pm
Okay, finally got over here to review this wonderful thing. You know how much I enjoyed this and your incredibly clever way of finding your plot bunnies. That Hobbit-lass was unbelievably charming . Already I can see lots of growth in your work, Ottis and I'm glad you're sticking with it. It was truly a joy to watch this thing come together so wonderfully and its all very neatly wrapped and tied with a bow. Bravo, pal.