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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Wed Mar 31, 2004 10:32 am
Your short stories about Legolas as a child and his little servant are quite cute, but a little angsty. The bond between the two boys is intriguing, to say the least and you need to write more, to show the young Prince's recovery now. Smile smiley face

I'd like to offer you some advice on the use of some words, such as "stridently" You used it when the queen was pulled aside, but it doesn't really fit there. An online dictionary will tell you it's meaning so that next time you can use it properly. There are other words that I have doubts about your use of, but that one stuck in my head more than any other.

Please do continue to write, you show great potential. *vbg*
 
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