Reviews for "The Salt-Rose"

Sun Dec 11, 2005 10:06 pm

Lady A, you have outdone yourself. This is sensual and evocative, and delightfully in-character in spite of the situation Smile smiley face

Mon Dec 12, 2005 3:43 pm

Oh Lady Aranel, what a promising start! With a few words, you draw my full attention to the Haradrim ladies entering, just as Legolas' eyes find them.

For example: Fifteen Haradrim women entered the room, nay, they glided across it.

Just this description alone made me go like: this is going to be exciting. Short, simple and very effective. Well done! Thumb smiley face

Mon Dec 12, 2005 6:50 pm

Really interesting start, and I did like the image of Legolas at the beginning. I'm not an expert and I have to say he's not my favourite character (though I have nothing against him) but it did seem very *in character* to me, or to my idea of Legolas. His change of opinion seemed to happen so suddenly, so it will be interesting maybe to see more exploration of that, and see how you develop this, how he gets on with the Haradrim.

Wed Oct 04, 2006 9:57 pm

This is such a great start but ... but... Where is the rest?? Please update! This is well written and interesting.
NiRi

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