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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Tue Dec 13, 2005 2:35 pm
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| Interesting choice of characters, not one that I've read before, but they seem well matched. It will take me a few days to catch up with all your chapters, but I'll be interested to follow this along as you add to it. |
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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005 Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
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Thu Feb 09, 2006 3:54 pm
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| I read and read and read and I like it very much. Tolkien put Aredhel very close to Curufin and Celegorm and the longing to meet exactly those two had made her leave Gondolin. I like that you match the white lady with Curufin. A new idea and nice one! Thank you for sharing! |
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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005 Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
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Thu Feb 16, 2006 7:05 pm
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| Now I am back again and wow. They way you brougth Celebrimbor into the story, the surviving infant. "The only son you have"...wow. |
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Sun Apr 16, 2006 3:19 pm
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| Oh Jenni, I am so delighted to see Marring of Bliss here. As you know, I've been following this story elsewhere, but I know more is ahead. What I so like about your story is how slowly you write that their lives change, from just bliss and the road of discovery... falling in love & the concequences of it. Celegorm is so full of energy in this story and so lovable, Curufin is handsome, Aredhel grows on you and Poldanis.. poor her. Celebrimbor's fate has a twist and you wrote that so cleverly... all in all, this story is a story I thoroughly enjoy, so thanks for sharing! |
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MrsAnalytica

Joined: 24 May 2013 Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
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Mon Jul 01, 2013 4:18 pm
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Teehee xD The Feanorians were so cute when they were little...
Going out on a picnic and forgetting to actually bring a picnic: Brilliant! This chapter made me smile. Also, Fëanor is being a rather decent parent here  |
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MrsAnalytica

Joined: 24 May 2013 Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
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Tue Jul 02, 2013 3:56 am
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I laughed so hard. Poor Kurvo. xD
Also, anatomy classes are apparently a non-mandatory subject? Aredhel's reaction was just brilliant... |
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MrsAnalytica

Joined: 24 May 2013 Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
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Tue Jul 02, 2013 3:20 pm
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| Well... Curufin certainly is fertile... Takes after his father in everything indeed xD |
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