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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Dec 15, 2005 12:14 am

This is a lovely story. I have always loved portrayals of Thranduil as a loving Adar to Legolas. Great job! Smile smiley face
 
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sheraiah

Joined: 16 May 2003
Reviews: 27
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Tue Dec 20, 2005 12:05 am

Oh, I do love your take on Thranduil, being a rather strident defender of the Elvenking myself. Very well done!
 
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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003
Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
Sat Dec 31, 2005 5:11 pm

First chapter: He shut his eyes, feeling the beginnings of a headache. The thought of a full-grown Legolas with his stubborn streak in full flower was almost too much to bear. *LOL*

I love, love, LOVE your Thranduil! I have to get Elb to read these - she'll love your Thranduil too I suspect. I can't begin to explain how great this is: the characterisation is spot on, the little details add so much. It brings the whole thing alive. It's fantastic!

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boz4PM
Joined: 01 Dec 2003
Reviews: 38
Location: London, UK
Sun Jan 01, 2006 5:09 am

Finished!

This was wonderful, Jael. Thranduil was fantastic. You managed to make him fit the character shown in The Hobbit without making him unsympathetic or unpleasant - he's irrascible (sp?), truculant, stubborn and strong-willed, but gracious, regal, loyal, a desperately good father, a warrior and thoroughly likeable.

I think the whole idea of how the mithril coat came into Smaug's possession isw entirely plausable and makes for a ver neat little plot. The burning of Dale was tragic, the dragon smug and intelligent, Legolas the image of his father in miniature, the humans showed character and humanity.

All in all, another fantastic job. Smile smiley face
 
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larie
Joined: 27 May 2007
Reviews: 6
Location: In the wilderness
Mon May 28, 2007 11:21 am

Wow..this was superb! Thank you for sharing this excellent story =]
 
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isabelle
Joined: 23 Feb 2011
Reviews: 2
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:13 pm

this is so beautiful
 
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