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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Fri Dec 23, 2005 1:35 pm
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I like! I would like to see more! Please update soon.  |
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Galadriel8891
Joined: 06 Dec 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: Somewhere out there...
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Sat Dec 24, 2005 10:43 pm
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| You have an interesting premise here, and I'd like to see where it goes. Your story (thus far) is well-written and fairly fluid, and you seem to know your way around the canon of both fandoms. I'll be interested to see how Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon get to Middle-earth - keep up the good work! |
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OrcMasher
Joined: 15 May 2006
Reviews: 1
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Mon May 15, 2006 2:54 pm
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| I though the story was well written, keep up the the good work |
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strider204
Joined: 15 Jul 2005
Reviews: 1
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Tue May 30, 2006 6:11 pm
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| I thought the story was great. I would also like to see where it goes. |
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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006
Reviews: 32
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Mon Jun 19, 2006 6:51 am
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i though this was a good story and would like to see it further. keep up the good work!  |
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ElennaElemirre
Joined: 08 Mar 2005
Reviews: 22
Location: East of the great sea
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:02 pm
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| Do you plan on continuing this? Because it has a very intriguing storyline. I hope you do. |
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Ekard
Joined: 22 Nov 2007
Reviews: 3
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Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:51 am
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I cannot see how anyone could find this story interesting, because you would have to insult our intelligence to have it not end one or two chapters after they reach Middle Earth. Why?
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1. They would bring a ship, which would presumably have *guns* since they are going into hostile territory.
2. Those guns would take care of all the armies of Mordor and Harad combined. Plus, say goodbye to Barad-Dur - and this time the foundations will not be left intact.
3. Its almost certain that the Ring could only be destroyed at Mt. Doom because it had a magically boosted higher melting point, so the guns of the Jedi's ship should be able to *easily* vaporize it.
4. Maybe, however, because it is magically linked to Mt. Doom, it can only be destroyed there? If that's what you think, then no problem. We'll zip over in our handy-dandy starship, hover over Mordor (laughing with glee as we shoot down any primitive over-large birds (wringwraiths) that try to stop us) and drop the ring strait into the volcano.
As has been demonstrated, you (the author) would have to go to ridiculous lengths to make this story remotely interesting. If the Jedi council has to 'teleport' them to Middle Earth, that too would break suspension of disbelief so badly it would be laughable, as if you made Gimli able to fly. |
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sexyninjalady1
Joined: 21 Jan 2010
Reviews: 3
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:59 pm
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| This is great!please continue! |
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blackmja
Joined: 03 Aug 2014
Reviews: 7
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Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:46 am
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What a great idea!!! This is a great start! & I am glad there is no Anakin... he annoys me... Qui-Gon is sexy as hell.. & Obi-Wan is cute.. so I am one happy fangirl.
I am curious of how they would travel to Arda though...
It would be so badass to see Middle Earth's reactions to their lightsabers, Jedi mind tricks, & elf-like abilities...
Please continue!! You are off to a great start & I love your writing style! |
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