Reviews for "The Prince and the Librarian"

Tue Jan 03, 2006 8:23 pm

I like your story, very interesting ... please continue!

Tue Jan 03, 2006 8:37 pm

This is delightful Sazziel. I really enjoy your style and your characterization. I love the thought of Eldarion in the library, although I hate to think of it in such a sad state. It looks like he's going to have it cleaned up in short order.

Wed Jan 04, 2006 9:28 am

Good Start. I like this. Eldarion isn't one you hear about much and I really like your characterization of him. I also enjoy your writing style. It's difficult to write in the present tense and keep it up and you're doing a great job of it. I'm looking forward to further chapters and seeing where this story goes.

Roxie Very Happy smiley face

Sun Feb 05, 2006 9:53 am

I am enjoying following this, especially your growing conflict with the lords in the council.

- as a side note. It's difficult to read without white space breaking the paragraphs, it tends to tire the eye of the reader (especially us old folks Wink smiley face

) It'd help your readibility if you'd put that extra line in. feel free to contact me privately if you'd like help with the formatting.

Sulriel

Mon Feb 06, 2006 2:48 am

I enjoyed this, glad I found this ficlet. Please continue.

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