Reviews for "When Shadow Touches Home"
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BellemaineChercoeur
Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sun Aug 31, 2003 9:47 am
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Fabulous, fantastic and fully realised characters! Of course, imagining a cute blond little young elfing version of Orlano Bloom helps, but I digress. You have taken hold of this plot and deftly interwoven a number of themes, plots, characters and ideals and it is a pleasure to read. You can see the pain and grief that both holds this family together and keeps them apart, and the way that grief is deal with is so well written! Beautiful dynamic between all the Mirkwood boys. I should admit that I am sitting here writing this at 12:45 am on a Monday morning, when I should be in bed sleeping, but I just *had* to finish this story. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Well Done  |
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Moralanqua
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Sun Aug 31, 2003 4:46 pm
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This is fantastic. I remember reading bits of this one before but never really properly until today. Its superb. The minor niggles are so small that a reader doesnt care. The characterisation is flawless and of such high standard you really must be congratulated. You developed and presented these characters like a pro and i now worship you!
Have you written any follow ups? I must have more! You ensnared me with this fic!
pls let me know! Schikane5@hotmail.com |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Wed Sep 03, 2003 10:45 pm
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Holy cow. This is incredible. It's too good for fic. The writing is professional quality. So as much as I love it, you really ought to ditch this ficwriting adventure and write stuff for money. I mean it. The characterizations are spot-on, the original characters slide into Middle-earth as if it were melted ice cream, and language, transitions, dialogue, narrative voice... wow. I mean, golly, you even used "Legolas's"... you must be an editor or a teacher. Only complete wordophiles or folks who get paid to know it have memorized the Elements of Style.  |
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 1:05 pm
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| Well...I just spent about three days reading every single one of your stories. I can't believe I haven't seen them before, they are wonderful! Absolutely. I could restate what everyone else said and more, but still it wouldn't do your work justice. PLEASE write more, and gift us with your awesome talent! I have NEVER been more impressed! You have an amazing skill that I could only dream to posess. These are amazing stories. I'm in awe. |
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