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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed Jan 04, 2006 10:03 pm
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| Zee, I enjoyed this. I especially liked your use of repetition, not just with the oars which worked wonderfully all the way through, but I liked how you used the bits such as the sugar and her hair threaded throughout to keep the entire piece tied together. |
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Frigg
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 63
Location: Taastrup, Denmark
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Thu Jan 05, 2006 5:29 am
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| Aha, so that's what you've been doing in stead of updating 'Rider of the Mark' ---- ????? I'm going to send little fluff bunnies at you, Madam! But as always you are a master of smut. Wow!! Love, Frigg |
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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005 Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 8:46 am
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| As usual very, very nice. |
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ZeeDrippyVessel

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 95
Location: deep south
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 1:59 pm
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Frigg said
> Aha, so that's what you've been doing in stead of updating Rider of the Mark ---- ????? I'm going to send little fluff bunnies at you, Madam! But as always you are a master of smut. Wow!! Love, Frigg
For your information, I have been QUITE productive over the holidays. I have the next chapter of Rider waiting in the wings (I won't flood the front page with my pitiful musings, so I wanted to get this out first), I have completed a HUGE future Rider chapter (with lots of Eomer!), I wrote this and have a large chunk of the next chapter of Tel' Lindar. I have also written and posted a VERY SILLY SELF-INSTERT of me and the Muses (Muses at the Mall) written for another challenge. It's not up here, (it's really not fit for public consumption) but if you ask nicely, I'll tell you where it is. In short, in a two week period, I wrote a total of 70 pages of vomitious mass.
And I prefer the word 'erotica'...
snerk.
Thanks everyone for reading. |
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angelbear
Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 5
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 3:49 pm
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| Beautiful, but then again, anything you do is. |
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LouiseP
Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Reviews: 12
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Sat Jul 21, 2007 12:14 pm
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| simply beautiful. what a lovely piece. i admit trying to figure out who the mystery pair were and guessing wrongly until the end. |
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