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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:35 am

Well done Lia. There is just something about those two - or should I now say three. LBJ
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Sun Jan 08, 2006 8:56 am

... the tense silence (the impossible fear) and the "thank you" ... well done Smile smiley face
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:18 am

That's such an interesting idea! That all of Meduseld, in a way, would be waiting to hear the cry of a new child in the house. Really brings home both the normal and extraordinary tension and joy of the event inevitably both public and private, as is any birth.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sun Jan 08, 2006 7:04 pm

Great! Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
 
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isilelensar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 61
Location: SE Tennessee
Mon Jan 09, 2006 4:36 pm

Awww... so sweet a glimpse of Eomer and Lothiriel... Smile smiley face

Thank you for sharing!
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:34 pm

nice drabble, just the right amount of tension... Very Happy smiley face
 
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Cuthalion

Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:09 pm

Bravo - absolutely delightful! I was pleasantly surprised when I saw this, (and painfully reminded that I still owe you a good dose of beta-ing) *blushes*

CĂșthalion
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:46 pm

Aww.. that was a sweet drabble. I enjoyed the imagery used coupled with the feeling of hope instead of despair.
 
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