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Lialathuveril

Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
Fri Jan 13, 2006 9:13 am
Yes, I thought you would not be able to resist this one.
Very nicely done (I keep repeating myself!), I like the 'moving circle of power and death' and the last sentence.
Love, Lia
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jan 13, 2006 10:57 am
Really great, LBJ, and it all comes down to that last line. I love it when a drabble, or anything for that matter, makes that strong, punchy, provocative statement. If you'd started with it, I would have read on most intrigued by the seeming conflict and strong language to see what you meant, but to have it at the end - after the development of the situation which leads to that statement's truth, just makes the end that much more powerful. Very, very, satisfying.
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Fri Jan 13, 2006 12:50 pm
Powerfull and wonderfully done.

"A man of clear mind." I love how that sums up Eomer.
 
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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005
Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
Sat Jan 14, 2006 8:08 pm
very nice. i too especially enjoyed the last bit.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Jan 16, 2006 10:29 am
Very nicely done. And, the imagery is vivid. Thank you for sharing.
 
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