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Gaslight
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 17
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Tue Sep 02, 2003 3:28 pm

Good start to this! Will be keeping an eye on it as you update. I like how you set the tone for it and didn't linger overly much on the female elf. Smile smiley face It's more the mood of the creature in the shadows that needs to be maintained.
 
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Gaslight
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 17
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Wed Sep 03, 2003 11:50 am

I think the blinding reflection from her hair was a bit much, but I won't hold it against you. Smile smiley face I'm curious about how the relationships between the characters will develop and what's in store for them.

If you have a chance, I'd like to know what you think about my OC in "Passages." I think they are the most challenging thing to write!
 
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glitteringrainclouds
Joined: 17 Jul 2004
Reviews: 33
Location: uk
Tue Jul 20, 2004 5:57 pm

read to chapter 19 and i am at a loss as there is nothing else to read!! help me by writing more Bow smiley face cant wait to see how this ends. Its great at the minute and very captivating. I aill add another review once i have read the ending!! promise lol
 
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faelbain
Joined: 21 Aug 2003
Reviews: 3
Location: England
Tue Oct 26, 2004 11:02 am

Thank you for your lovely reviews, Gaslight and Glitteringrainclouds! I'll hopefully get up to the rewrite very quickly! Please be patient! It's worth the wait! Very Happy smiley face
 
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NUGRIF
Joined: 16 Dec 2004
Reviews: 5
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Wed Jun 08, 2005 2:49 pm

I LOVE YOUR STORY! WHAT I LOVE EVEN MOERE IS THE FACT THAT I DON'T HAVE TO WAIT 3 OR 4 MONTHS FOR AN UPDATE. THANKS FOR YOUR DEDICATION!
 
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faelbain
Joined: 21 Aug 2003
Reviews: 3
Location: England
Wed Sep 07, 2005 8:06 am

NUGRIF, apologies for the time it's taking. I hope the rest of the updates will come quicker! =)
 
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