Reviews for "A Night to Remember"

Wed Jan 18, 2006 10:23 am

This is very sweet.

Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:38 pm

nice, very nice!

Thu Jan 19, 2006 3:35 am

Very sweet, but you could need a beta. There are several misspellings and awkward use of words; perhaps you should seek for support in the forum of this archive. There is an extra section for beta readers (though I just made a fast revision; you'll find it in your mailbox. And of course it is entirely your decision if you use my suggestions or not!).

Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:56 pm

This is a nice start. I did check your stats before commenting, so I know that English is your not your first language. In that light, I commend you. I would never try to write in my second language (Spanglish). I do understand some of the phrasing, now. You also seem to have quite a few typos and grammar errors. As stated by Cuthalion, you would benefit greatly from a beta. They are there to help you. I think everyone uses them, almost without exception. Even as a more "seasoned" writer, I miss a lot of things that I catch by re-reading my work. I also read it aloud to see how it sounds. Then, I have someone beta it. I am sure that you can find someone who will help you out. Well wishes. Thank you for sharing.

Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:49 pm

i loved it! by the valar, ive been making good reading choices today! it was very entertaining, and you have saved me from the bordoms of afterschool

everyone commented about spelling, so ill say this. im a horrible speller! so it dont bother me at all. keep up the good work!

i speak spanish

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