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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Wed Jan 18, 2006 5:12 pm
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| Woohoo!! I'm so glad you are writing a new story!! This one has a lot of potential I can't wait for more! So hurry up and update! ^_^ |
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Sulriel
Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:30 am
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| You have a lovely start here. I'm enjoying your characterizations, Aragorn's young nobility and his strength in spite of his uncertainty - and the bits of conflict that are arising. |
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Sirannon
Joined: 04 Jan 2005
Reviews: 24
Location: Denmark
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Thu Jan 19, 2006 11:45 am
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| Very promising beginning. I like it. It is interesting how a human raised by elves would feel about "plain" humans. Looking forward to an update! |
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WinterTouched
Joined: 21 Jan 2006
Reviews: 4
Location: new york
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Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:53 pm
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Halbarad. *drool* Sex god.
It's a great start- my two favorite characters engaged in male bonding! Your portrayal is excellent. |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:44 pm
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You go into so much detail! I LOVE IT! hehe I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon!  |
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004
Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 5:34 pm
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| I am a self confessed PRF (pervy Ranger Fancier) and so I started reading this with much anticipation and you haven't disappointed. I'll definitely be adding it to my list of watched stories! |
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004
Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Thu Feb 02, 2006 1:19 pm
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| This chapter was just as well crafted as the earlier ones. I really am enjoying this o much and I hope you keep at it with lots of regular updates please! |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Thu Feb 02, 2006 5:30 pm
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NNOOO!!!!! How can you stop there!?You are a meanie!!! You better update soon! haha I don't like cliff-hangers. But on another note awesome chapter!  |
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manon
Joined: 01 Feb 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: uk
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Fri Feb 03, 2006 5:41 am
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hi really enjoying your next story. Liked the previous one about the extended Fellowship too - should have told you that then, sorry!
I think you have captured very well the uncertainty that Aragorn must feel at being a fish out of water, his determination to adjust, his pride and love for his elvish "family" - and how those feelings make him react to his new situation and his people: he knows that he must become one of them to be accepted by them; knows he has much to learn, but doesn't want to appear either ignorant or too "different"; but he also loves his foster family and will not deny it or allow himself or that family to be put down because of it.
You also show nicely the reactions by age to Aragorn's arrival and background. All in all a full picture of the village and plenty of new characters, with I think a lot of potential for a range of lovely story lines over (I hope!) a period of time. I am looking forward to that. (I hope that this does not sound patronising - it is not intended as such, rather as admiration for a well laid setting, prime for development ... )
I wonder why his grandmother behaves as she does?
And I am hoping that Aragorn's elvish healing skills will add to the growing welcome I am sensing from the dunedain.
Thank you and I am awaiting your next chapter eagerly. |
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StArSpLaSh
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:49 pm
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| Yet another awesome chapter!! You are so good at making pictures with words I could picture everything I liked how they smoked out the orcs hehe I can't wait for the next chapter so I hope it comes soon! |
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