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vladazhael

Joined: 16 Dec 2005 Reviews: 147
Location: Gone mad, back later
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Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:18 pm
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very very nice, and bursting with plot bunnies!
did the rangers resent faramir's actions, or did they understand his difficult realtionship with his father and follow him willingly?
did denethor really expect faramir to go, or was it a test?
and the families of those who were killed - did they accept it as a fact of war, or resent faramir for leading their loved ones to their doom?
did any of the common citizens of gondor understand denethor's mental state? boromir says at the council that his father's rule is failing, but how exactly did he mean that?
that's one big can of worms you just opened in my head!  |
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:29 am
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| That was so bittersweet and very moving. A very clever use of 100 words. The change of emotions mid-way through caught me off guard. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:52 am
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This was very thought-provoking and full of sorrow. Well done! Thank you for sharing  |
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:38 am
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| Incisive insight, Ro! a vital ingredient for any good drabble. |
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WinterTouched

Joined: 21 Jan 2006 Reviews: 4
Location: new york
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Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:11 pm
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*dooms denethor*
poor old faramir...pretty boys always end up in situations of direst need.
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:33 pm
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| I've read this a couple of times and tried to think of something insightful to say in this review, but I'll have to settle for agreeing with those who have posted above. Heartbreaking and powerful. well-done. |
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Kendra

Joined: 01 Jul 2003 Reviews: 46
Location: USA
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Thu Jan 26, 2006 12:57 am
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Very nicely done! You brought so much to the table with this drabble in such a short space and you made it very bittersweet and indeed most powerful. I really enjoyed this glimpse into Faramir's thoughts and frame of mind.
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Ellethill
Joined: 15 Dec 2005 Reviews: 4
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Thu Jan 26, 2006 12:46 pm
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| Wonderful!! I loved this very much. Short, to the point, and meaningful. And so powerful in its brevity. |
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004 Reviews: 57
Location: UK
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 12:19 am
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| A chilling and moving ending. |
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:49 pm
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What? No Haldir smut? Sorry ops:
This was quite a beautiful glimpse of Denethor, and a said contrast of what he was and what he became. Heartbreaking for Faramir to hearken back to before his father's madness set in, and to know, in his wisdom, that men died because of that same madness. All done in your typically lovely and subtle prose. No word wasted, it is absolutely hauntingly beautiful, Roh. |
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