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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:28 am
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That was hilarious. Crazy, pregnant Arwen, dumbass Faramir... Poor Aragorn. I think I'd move and leave no forwarding address. I'll be thinking about Faramir and his milk in the brothel all day and laughing. |
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Vilwarin

Joined: 01 Jun 2004 Reviews: 23
Location: AnnĂºminas
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:25 am
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O, I was laughing my ass off there. And that at school nonetheless!!! Pity Aragorn for his desparate situation.
This is just great, fantastic!!!
I knew what they had stumbled in when they reached the sign with 'exotic' on it.
Whatan embarasing situation to be in indeed.
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:29 pm
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LOL! delightfully OOC! - what fun to think that the great king and his fabulous Elven queen are indeed not so different than the rest of us.  |
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004 Reviews: 57
Location: UK
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Wed Jan 25, 2006 8:30 pm
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This was just hilarious.Poor innocent FAramir and almost as innocent Aragorn.I hope Arwen eventually appreciates all the trouble he went to.
One tiny criticism,your language tends to be rather too modern and informal for Tolkien's world.
That said, I did enjoy the story and it was great fun.
Thank you for your kind review of my story.I don't know what this site does to formatting,as it was fine in Word ! |
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Brokenfeather

Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Reviews: 19
Location: South Amestris
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Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:49 am
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do u have any idea how funny this is?!?! i laughed till i burst! ive read it at least 10x's and stil cant get enough of it! write another write another!!! |
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Amsy
Joined: 18 Jan 2006 Reviews: 1
Location: Australia
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Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:28 pm
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thats was sooooooooooo funny. i loved it so much. poor faramir i loved him like that! giggle. that was funny funny funny!  |
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Halfwest

Joined: 21 Aug 2003 Reviews: 8
Location: Ladros
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Mon Feb 13, 2006 5:09 am
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*falls over laughing*
Oh I LOVE your oblivious little 36-year-old-virgin Faramir. Priceless. |
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Brokenfeather

Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Reviews: 19
Location: South Amestris
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:57 pm
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i shall comment again, for i read it another 20x's... i cant get enough of it! i laughed my tailfeathers off at school too!  |
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felis1215

Joined: 14 Oct 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:45 pm
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| Teehee... looks like Arwen takes after her grandmother more than we thought. "Galadriel Moments" are priceless. |
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