Reviews for "Immortality"

Fri Feb 10, 2006 2:56 am

This was very romantic and touching Smile smiley face

Thank for letting me help and thanks for sharing Very Happy smiley face

Oh, and you know that I know the answer to the character(s) riddle, so I'm not going to say.

Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:50 am

Oh my goodness Lydia, what a beautiful and touching drabble. As for characters, I am thrown off balance a bit by the golden leaves (of Lorien), to be honest I at first thought Amroth, but he drowned in the sea searching for Nimrodel, so maybe Celeborn (the reference to the golden leaves)?

Oh well it doesn't matter, this is a gem of a drabble, just beautiful!

Fri Feb 10, 2006 5:41 pm

I like the language very much and this makes for a very nice read. I'll admit I have no idea which character it's referring to, but my mind isn't entirely tuned in at the moment. Cool smiley face

Didn't really detract though; the drabble still has a nice 'Tolkien' feel to it.

SW

Sat Feb 11, 2006 10:16 am

I like that you do not mention characters. It is much broader that way. Leave the reader to use their imagination a bit. It forces one to do more than just read. All-in-all, this is a very nice piece. Thank you for sharing.

Fri Feb 17, 2006 3:07 pm

well done. This one is smooth and very powerful, you packed a lot of emotion in it.

Sat Feb 18, 2006 4:39 pm

Awww, How did he get out of the ocean? How did he swim back? Where is she? Oh, this is stunning, Lydia. I adore him, though I've made him rather goofy and scatterbrained with lurrrve in my fic. Wonderful, just absolutely lovely and it brought a tear to my eye.

Jesxxx

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