Reviews for "Singing In The face of Death"
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Thu Sep 04, 2003 3:29 pm
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| A proper and provocative tribute to an almost forgotten character. For once, however, I found the poet's rhythm stumbled a little in my mind's voice. But the lines "as though the steel had sheltered in his heart" and "the steel had lost its shine" I found particularly resonant. |
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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Thu Sep 04, 2003 12:33 am |
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Sat Feb 21, 2004 12:49 pm
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A somewhat dispassionate poem. Some of the lines are a little awkward--the "But free men etc" was unusually rough.
The imagery was fine, though, and the general structure sound. It needs just a little tweaking to reach its full potential. |
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