Reviews for "Master of Shadows"

Wed Feb 22, 2006 3:38 pm

These are lovely, Space. You are really a master of description, and you stay wonderfully consistent to the tone and theme of description in each piece. I noticed especially in the first one with the consistency in likening everything to stone both in sight and sound. I have discovered with each of your stories there is a certain phrase or turn of words that hooks me like a largemouth bass. I was only going to read one chapter because the dust rhino's have threatened to take over my house....RIGHT! I'm heading back for my second reading! I'm still such a newbie to ME I don't know jack about the history of the Witch King but you really made a multidimensional character out of him. Anything else I could say Ghetto already did!

SpaceWeavil is da BOMB! Kneel, Suckers smiley face

Roh

Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:36 pm

Wrath is such a tease!! You left a cliffhanger on that one. What's wrong with the queen? Why did she make him leave? URGH I cannot believe you did that. Evil or Very Mad smiley face

That was great though. Your descriptions of things in your writing is just so detailed I feel like I'm standing right there. Which during Envy was a baaaad thing. He was right though - he would make people fear him.

Bravo Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face

Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:42 pm

Ha! He just got there and he's already planning to take over. So very WiKi (stealing from Mita) of him. He's definately gotten greedy Actually no, he's been greedy all alone I think. Another wonderful one Space. Now I gotta go read Lust so shhh....

Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:54 pm

Okay I think Lust is now my favorite. I bet thats no shock.

a pair of heavy doors, on which was carved a likeness of Fëanor, lying in his sons’ arms at the Battle Underneath the Stars. Morindur breathed deeply as he inspected the work. To think that he had stood in the presence of that bloodline’s last scion barely moments before.

Nice touch! I really liked the way Gladdy handled him. Very good interaction between them and his disdain for the elves is not surprising. I mean he is just a Man after all.
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Another Gem Space.

Fri Feb 24, 2006 6:11 pm

I am stunned! But I like this!

Sat Feb 25, 2006 4:14 am

Ah Space! What can I say now, after reading a bunch of such wonderful and glowing reviews? These are masterpieces in every single bit, magnificently done. I'm simply in awe of the language, descriptions and the entire idea of the story. Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face

and thank you for sharing.

Big Hug smiley face

Binka

Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:07 am

I have just finished reading this for the second time - all the while gawking at the screen in wide-eyed astonishment, I might add - and, still, I can't decide on my favorite. All of these were wonderfully written, with much thought given to characterization and motivation of your protagonist.

However, if I were forced to pick favorites (can't decide on just one) it would be these, in no particular order: 'Gluttony' - so sinfully sensuous; 'Envy' - so deliciously disturbing; and Lust - because it caught me by surprise (your Galadriel was just perfect)

Thank you for writing this.

Thu Nov 09, 2006 11:05 am

whoa.

Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:49 am

This is utterly facinating to watch how the wraiths became what they were also very sad.

Tue Jul 31, 2007 3:14 pm

Wow, I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Excellent and unique work of fiction. Smile smiley face

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