Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Fri Jan 30, 2004 3:08 am
Cool! I love the structure, and the seeming chanting tone of the poem~!
Good work!
Istarnie
Joined: 15 Sep 2006 Reviews: 25
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 5:04 am
I like the chanting, nursery rhyme feel to this as well - though as with many real nursery rhymes, the content is a touch 'scary' of nature. Thank you for writing!
FatiferousPoet
Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Sat Oct 28, 2006 10:06 am
That is a very sweet poem, touching on inner strength and determination. The rhythm, rhyme and repeated verse was used very thought full. Nice choices!