Lovely interaction between the boys, but heartbreaking with the last couple of lines.
NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:39 am
Ouch! Poor B! This is a wonderful little story, Rous, with a great deal of pleasurable parts - Faramir just barging in, the soldiers' feelings toward F, that you refer to Boromir as future steward as his companions must think him ... lots and lots woven easily throughout.
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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Wed Nov 22, 2006 8:06 am