Reviews for "She Bids Me Call Thee"

Tue May 02, 2006 6:56 am

*swallows laboriously*

Ohhhh... damn, woman, and now you tempt me to fill that gap in between the moment when they entered the chamber to when Morwen lay sated on her bed. *fans herself and silently curses her own heated imagination*

Brilliant. Sizzling hot. And sooooo yummy!

Sat May 06, 2006 7:36 am

My beyuty,

I will be heer at nuun to cee that yuu re well. Rest ontil then.

Gamling

*melts to a helpless puddle of glee*

My, this is marvelous. Dark times and dark men, dangerous moments, a sick Morwen (awww, poor darling!), and a strong and caring Gamling. And this letter!

*melts a little bit more*

Sun May 07, 2006 1:15 am

Oooo *sheds a tear* What a touching ending.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story.

Fabulous chapter! I felt sorry for Morwen, but she's in good hands Very Happy smiley face

And it's great to see how Morwen and Gamling's relationship is growing stronger.

More, please Smile smiley face

Thu May 11, 2006 2:19 am

Your favorite hobbit? Is there any hobbit in that tale...? *grins* And yes, I do indeed think that they should have their happy ending... but you might add some angst by unfolding what happens in Edoras during the Ring War a little bit further. That scene with Éowyn, Théoden and Gríma was wonderful, and I would like to see more of this.

And the Inn (and Morwen and her folks there) might be affected by the darkening of Meduseld. Simply some drama before they ride into the sunset together, yes? And it might even be difficult for Gamling's fellow Rohirrim to deal with the fact that Gamling intends to wed a whore...? (Háma's mistrust would be a clear symptom...)

Thu May 11, 2006 2:20 am

Wonderful chapter! I giggled while reading the messages, so suggestive and funny at the same time. But, I'm a bit sad that this is the end of this tale, even though I know there will be the next. I like the way in which you brought a darker, disturbing feeling into this latest part, represented by Grima. All in all, a fabulous story, Neu, and I will echo the previous reviews by saying that you are a great story-teller. Thank you! I'll be waiting for the next installment of your saga Very Happy smiley face

Binka

Thu May 11, 2006 6:44 am

Oh, it should have a happy ending eventually. But dark times are coming so I'm sure agnst would appear. You've got the Ring War, then they've got to deal with Morwen being a whore and all.

I'm just glad there's going to be more. I've really enjoyed this.

Sat May 13, 2006 2:51 pm

Just wanted to let you know I have thoroughly enjoyed these stories. Thanks to you and Zee I have developed a raging Gamling fixation. Haven't had a chance to review because my life is hellish at the moment. Two jobs and a show up and running has been an odyssey to say the least. But anyway... there are so many ways you could go with the ending of this story, and all of them would be plausible. The incurable romantic in me would love to see Gamling and Morwen end up happily ever after, but the cynical part if me, which has been very loud and obnoxious of late, often wins out over the romantic and says that happily ever after rarely happens and usually when it does, it's not what one would expect it to be. Sort of the old "be careful what you wish for" clause...

Those are my thoughts. I can't wait to see which direction you decide to go.

Cheers,
Roxie Very Happy smiley face

Sat May 13, 2006 2:53 pm

OOOHHH I almost forgot. I loved Grima "flouncing" as you put it, off in a huff. Flouncing suits him perfectly.

Mon May 15, 2006 11:13 am

I've really enjoyed this and am sad, but understand that all good things must end, that the end is near. I'm sure your muses will come back soon. Just write what you feel about the couple - it's all good.

Sun Apr 08, 2007 3:07 pm

This was another delightful installment. I'm so glad things worked out for Scarlet and that Morwen and Gamling's relationship is growing ever stronger. But now, of course, you have introduced a note of forboding with the appearance of Grima, forcing us to consider what is to come and how they will weather the storm, and also some worries on the personal front. People are beginning to notice their closeness and it looks like some of them don't approve. I had a moment of panic when I read your author's note at the end, but then I remembered that this was written a year ago and that I wouldn't have to wait to read the next in the series.

Happy Easter, my dear! Very Happy smiley face

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