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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:35 am
I love a good story freshly told and you bring a lot of nice and new perspectives to this story - Boromir's focus on the sword, and Aragorn's admiration for Denethor for example. Well done.

I'll look forward to more from you.
 
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Lialathuveril

Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
Fri Mar 24, 2006 4:04 pm
Hello Gandalf's apprentice,
Oshun mentioned you so I was curious to see what you write. I'm more into the Rohirrim myself, but it's nice to see more detail and background added to the books in a believable way. Poor Boromir!

One small recommendation only - what threw me slightly was when you suddenly changed into first person for Aragorn. What I do is use italics for that sort of thing (on this site with html tags).

Happy writing
Lia
 
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