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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:31 pm
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Bwuhahahahahahaha!
I love that Eomer is like, "My brain hurts." Looking for wine, and rather....submarined...by the whole situation. Too funny.
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Mon May 15, 2006 11:08 am
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| I'm loving it how you've added competion for Lothiriel. You're writing of Eomer is wonderful as always. |
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Lialathuveril

Joined: 24 Aug 2005 Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
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Sat May 27, 2006 1:56 am
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That was a brilliant chapter and so long, you could really wallow in it. You really are the mistress of 'male conversation'! The action wasn't bad either...
I loved how you set the whole thing up with the passage at the beginning making the reader wonder what he'd got himself in to and then the actual scene after. Eothain and Aelfhere were very well characterized and very believable. And the end makes one wonder what exactly happened at Imrahil's party, although Lothiriel's feeling seem to be becoming slightly clearer. Anyway, loved it!
And I like to see some more dead sea creatures.
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Sun May 28, 2006 10:46 am
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Still going strong. Loved the banter between friends in this latest chapter. Even hardened horselords have a warm, fuzzy side  |
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Mon Jun 05, 2006 7:34 pm
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Okay, the last two chapters have amused me greatly.
Dead Sea Creatures. Painted Whores. *giggles*
I look forward to reading more.  |
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:51 am
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| Once again, I'm hooked. |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006 Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Tue Jun 06, 2006 1:40 pm
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| Relly like this story. Love the character development. Love the humor, want more please. |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006 Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Wed Jun 14, 2006 5:11 pm
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| I like your story. Your characters are mature but not stuffy. There is humor but suttle seriousness. Looking forward to more. |
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mahisslp
Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Reviews: 16
Location: Ohio
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Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:43 pm
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I really enjoy your writing style! Have loved all your Eomer/Lothiriel scenarios. I would be hard pressed to pick a favorite as each one convinces me that that must be just how it happened. Looking forward to more! |
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Wed Jun 14, 2006 10:21 pm
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My turn: what I like is the way Eomer is characterized as falling for her while not comng out and saying it, the little things he likes about her and his preoccupation with her.
And her... directness: I got all girly mushy (as I am in touch with my feminine side, another result of this fic). That scene was delivered with perfection. And as a male, I greatly appreciated that scene, really falling for the romantic fantasy.
I also like the stream of consciousness pieces where you allow us to see that he is hoplessly gone without him knowing it. Humorous, touching and great fun to read. |
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