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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Thu Mar 30, 2006 7:54 am

Hi Nancy, I like this one a lot - the comparison of the Men to Minas Tirith itself, the companionship and loyalty of the troops and the powerful ending with the thought of the bitterness of Victory.
 
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Thu Mar 30, 2006 11:56 am

Very nicely structured. Well done. LBJ
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Mar 30, 2006 7:22 pm

Already said so elsewhere, but this is quite excellent, the very example of what a drabble can and should do: a slice that reveals, a window that enlightens -- meaning in every word!
Beautifully done, as always! Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Fri Mar 31, 2006 11:40 am

Very nicely done. Faithful and loyal - this drabble answered the challenge well.
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Sat Apr 01, 2006 5:11 am

Once again you astound with the perfect blend of stunning imagery and heartbreaking emotion. You may be Duchess of Redpen, but you are definately the Queen of Drabble. No one that I know can outshine you in your ability to create a vivid portrait with a simple, concise turn of phrase. I have been re-reading The Divine Comedy. When I read the beginning of Canto IX, where Alighieri manages to convey in less than 50 words, Virgil's doubt and Dante's ensuing terror so starkly, it reminded me of your astounding ability...the phrase 'powerfully subtle' came to mind. This is another amazing addition to your collection, of which you should well be proud.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:37 am

Very emotional and powerful. This drabble is perfect. I'm at a loss for words. Wonderful job Very Happy smiley face Thank you for sharing.
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:41 pm

Fantastic yet again, Nancy. I mean, I adore your portrayal of Boromir, goes without saying, but I just am always awe-struck at your use of words and, as Ghettoelleth's commented, how you can produce something so effective without wasting a single word. Excellent stuff yet again.

SW
 
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