Joined: 21 Jul 2005 Reviews: 18
Location: Where no pathway goes
Mon Apr 03, 2006 4:22 am
Very good story... I could picture the scenes and all of the happenings in my mind, seeing the desert, the tall spy and the people in the village very clearly.
Thank you for sharing this!
krazykataave
Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Mon Apr 03, 2006 2:51 pm
The subject matter is foreign to me but the way you descriptively wrote i could see everything clearly and understand what was going on.
Brokenfeather
Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Reviews: 19
Location: South Amestris
Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:15 pm
i liked it! i had no idea where the hell he is though.. oh well. im oblivious to most things most of the time. what can i say? its just how i am again, good job.