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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 12:37 pm
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Nice Beginning. I'll be looking forward to future updates  |
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Brokenfeather

Joined: 31 Jan 2006 Reviews: 19
Location: South Amestris
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:07 pm
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very good! i liked it very much. ill be waiting for another update. Aragorn's my fave character, and i thought it was funny that Arwen was mad at him Young love
thank you! u saved me from over an hour of after school boredom! the kids here are SO loud and ANOYING! LOL |
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004 Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Sun May 28, 2006 8:50 am
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| This is coming along very nicely. I appreciate your attention to details in the depth of the thoughts and ideals of the world, especially in writing the Dunadan - we have so little information about their home life compared to some of the other bits of history that we're given, but you're doing well in working in their thoughts and emotions with what we do know about them. |
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RoxieRxChicago

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Mon Jul 03, 2006 7:45 pm
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Lovely chapter. You do an excellent job of allowing us to see the world through the eyes of the Dunadan. I loved Halbarad's interesting version of the story of Beren and Luthien. Very creative! I'll be interested to see how Aragorn earns his nickname. And your discription of Annuminas in the past was beautiful. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment. And by the way, I love your avatar. I'm a huge Disney dork Fantasia is one of my favorites. |
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Sirannon
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Reviews: 24
Location: Denmark
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Sat Aug 26, 2006 1:36 pm
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This is a very well crafted story. I like the pacing, Estel's existetial thoughts regarding his name, and the conflict among the dunedain regarding their uncertain future.
Can't wait for an update
Cheers
Rune |
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Aganuzir

Joined: 31 May 2005 Reviews: 94
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:42 pm
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A very interesting, well written story. Thank you for posting. I will be waiting for updates!
Cheers,
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orist
Joined: 28 Feb 2006 Reviews: 40
Location: The Prancing Pony
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Sun Jun 08, 2008 11:04 pm
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| This is a great story? Will there be more? Please? |
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