Reviews for "Thangorodrim"

Sun Apr 16, 2006 8:54 am

ecellent use of 'smoking' in the challenge, the heavy black clouds of filth that hovered for so many years. Well done.!

Sun Apr 16, 2006 9:54 pm

Excellent! I like the way you conveyed a constant, disturbing feeling of something terrifying and unavoidable to emerge. Thank you for sharing Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 17, 2006 2:33 pm

Very nice. The waiting, the expectation, their knowledge of the terror to come. Bravo!

Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:15 am

Aww Inglor, you know I was dancing in my chair reading this! What amazing imagery you've managed with 100 words. You definately pulled a Nancy. This made me wonder if the smoke that belched into the air did not increase the madness over the Silmarils as part of the poisoning of the minds. The last two lines are devastatingly prophetic, absolutely worthy of your skill and heart wrenching. Good on you.

Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:17 pm

This is chilling. I like the part about how they steal the laughter. Very well done!

Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:17 pm

captures a very Cold War-front line spirit in few words - good! I liked it.

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