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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:37 am
I really like your portrayal of Elrond in this piece. The weariness and uncertainty seem very in tune with what he would feel at that point in his life. Dialogue seemed very natural and the narrative voice was equally appropriate, sympathetic and knowledgeable at the same time. I very much enjoyed it and thank you for it.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Apr 18, 2006 8:29 am
You chose a really interesting moment to explore here, and brought forth all the conflicting and connecting elements well. This piece would be improved, however, by some judicious editing for tense, sentence structure, and format.
 
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