Reviews for ""Whereas the Elves remain ... ""

Wed Apr 19, 2006 12:41 am

I like the way you captured uncertainty and elusivenes. Was it a dream? Or maybe not? Very Happy smiley face

Very nicely written challenge entry. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Sun Apr 23, 2006 1:50 pm

For a second I thought... oh this is Legolas walking through Fangorn Forest, trying to perceive the ents, but later on I realised that it was about elves and looked at the title. I wonder though who the elf is... Smile smiley face

Mon Apr 24, 2006 3:17 pm

I didn't read the summary first, so I assumed for the first few lines that this was Elu/Melian. Or maybe Beren/Luthien, Eol/Aredhel, Aragorn/Arwen... you know, one of those lovers-in-the-woods things that Tolkien was so fond of. So when I realized, at the end, that it was humans (maybe even modern humans) and the flit of ancient elvishness, it just made so much sense. We do have a sort of magical love for them, don't we?

Mon Apr 24, 2006 11:30 pm

This was incredibly unique, very sensual in an innocently erotic way, and very beautiful. What a wonderful piece this is, very touching.

Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:29 pm

I love, love, love this!

" I felt like a child, not joyous and buoyant, but as one who´d gleefully snatched a cookie yet quivered, expecting reprimand." Absolutely brilliant! I´m in awe!

Thanks for sharing!

Anna

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