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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Fri Apr 21, 2006 8:51 am
This is a lovely view of Denethor struggling to be a good and fair father and young Faramir wanting to grow up, trying to find himself and his strengths. Well done, IMO, especially for a first effort. Smile smiley face
 
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Lialathuveril

Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
Sat Apr 22, 2006 1:47 pm
You've chosen an interesting topic for your first story and have delivered a well written and intriguing first chapter. What I suggest you do, though, is to give the reader a hint how old Faramir is. I know you name the year, but I for one have no idea when Faramir was born and what year his mother died. Is she still alive at that point?

I'm looking forward to more insights into Denethor's characters and the interesting family dynamics you hint at.

Happy writing!
Lia
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:40 am
Enduring story for your first work. I can't wait to read more of young Faramir.
 
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005
Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
Fri May 19, 2006 12:11 pm
I think you really did a great job with these! I especially like how you show that Denethor loves Faramir and admires those traits the two share. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.


Nienor
 
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